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Their bodies writhed together, feeling the aftershocks of their commingling of fluids.
Amanda could feel her heart pounding, or was it Mike's as he lie on top of her; she wasn't sure. Mike lifted his head, kissing her softly whispering that he'd been taken with her for years and just didn't think that once would be enough. She smiled, knowing he was so right and wondering if he'd chauffeur her back and forth to work daily, as she knew there was now no hope at all for getting that car after her super night.
- COMMENTS
n8Romantic3 months agoWell written story and compelling story line. Will Amanda really give up that car, and submit to Ed? Seems so, but Amanda is a complex woman with an equally complex libido.
WriteOfWayalmost 12 years agoAhh, my dear friend, you finished it! After your first draft vanished, you sounded so disillusioned that I was afraid you wouldn't rewrite the story, and I was sad for you. There are few things more depressing than spending hours and hours on a document, only for it to become lost or damaged. But you put your mind to rewriting it, and I'm thrilled that you did! You remembered your plot and details very well; the finished story is surprisingly close to the original one that went *poof*.
You have a knack for telling a story, and your endings aren't what the reader is led to expect they will be. That's what good writing is; telling an interesting tale in a way that keeps the reader engaged and with a twist thrown in here or there. You should write more. I personally wouldn't have minded one bit if Amanda and Mike had extended their lovemaking session well into the wee hours. But if a sequel isn't in order, entertain (and arouse) us with another hot fantasy, will you? xo
