All Comments on 'Amateur Dramatics Night Ch. 01'
by Chris7sw
- 5 Comments
Joscelyn2tgover 9 years ago...At times, and you almost needed a character list (with gender 1 and gender 2, lol). I've never read anything that manages to stretch the transgender rainbow into such a psychedelic 'whirlpool' before. I really liked it, it was a fun read. The writing had a couple hiccups but hardly anything to really complain about. A second set of eyes would have found them. Thanks for sharing such a delightful piece of work, and it seems there could be a chapter 2? Cheers! --- Josie
Anonymousover 9 years agoI LIKE SEX
AND PUTTIN' ON SKIRTS
AS LONG AS UP MY ASSHOLE
CUM DOES SQUIRT!
Heisenhugover 9 years agoI'm with Joscelyn on this one; Fucking brilliant, literally as well as figuratively.
How's the song go? Boys who like girls that were boys but like boys who'll be girls that like boys... No, don't think that's exactly the lyric but oh well.
Chris7swover 9 years agoAuthorMany thanks fellas; nice to hear from you - glad you found it fun.
It was always planned to be 'entertaining' as well as erotic, as many of my stories are; they're not everyone's cup of tea but I prefer being cheerful and amusing rather than blunt and 'straight in there' so to speak.
I am toying with Chapter 2 but this one was enough to confuse me as well, at least for a while!
Sorry if there are some minor errors....diligent re-reading, spellchecking and proofreading still didn't help, I'm afraid.
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