All Comments on 'Amateur Gods (Ltd.)'

by voxincognito56

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wow, I never thought that a story could put me to sleep

That was terrible.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
excellent!

excellent in style but too subtle for some ... sexy without being gross.

diggypopdiggypopover 13 years ago
Nice and light-hearted...

The twist ending was a bit too contrived, although if there had been more detail about some of the other couples coming together I probably wouldn't have minded.

I really think with a bit more development you'd have a well-written piece of fiction, maybe still a bit fluffy and frothy but with a far more satisfying feeling at the end. Don't misunderstand: I enjoyed what there was, but it left me wanting more.

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