by voxincognito56
excellent in style but too subtle for some ... sexy without being gross.
The twist ending was a bit too contrived, although if there had been more detail about some of the other couples coming together I probably wouldn't have minded.
I really think with a bit more development you'd have a well-written piece of fiction, maybe still a bit fluffy and frothy but with a far more satisfying feeling at the end. Don't misunderstand: I enjoyed what there was, but it left me wanting more.