All Comments on 'Amateur Photographer Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
About Time

I have been waiting for you to follow up on your 2 series. Thanks for adding to it. I hope you continue to work on both of them.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Different!

A photo Shoot turns to sex - or is it Sex that turns into a Photo Shoot? Whatever it is - the enjoyment factor was high. Good Read! Nicely written!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
waiting for Car Show Slut next installment

Hi David,

this slut is waiting for the next installment of Car show slut. please keep writing regularly.

regards

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
As always, fantastic, great plot, great writing

Another great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
loved this one!

I loved this one. Once again you made me cum hard. Many thanks!

asianToyasianToyover 8 years ago
Forgotten Characters

Sarah... where's Sarah?

I always find it a bit disturbing when a character just drops someone and moves on. It seems like authors who do that are just interested in the next body to fuck. Wouldn't it be more enjoyable if David interacted with them at some level?

Still loving the story, just a bit sad...

asianToy

Rapier875Rapier875over 5 years ago
Very nice !

Just why did I never meet a girl like Jodi around 45 years ago ?

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What can I say, other than I am really just your average warm-hearted nice guy. I do have an active imagination, and sometimes stories spring from it - some of which are on here. I think the old cliche 'sex is all in the mind' has a literal truth to it (otherwise these chat ro...

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