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by Smuthcheri

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Sweet

What a sweet story! Thank you. Very erotic.

docbuceydocbuceyover 15 years ago
Great work

Please you have t write more i beg you lol

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

This was not the best. Think of a piece of art - you can.t have two center pieces one has to stand out. Same here the scene from the T.V. took away from the scene happening in the story.

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