by JayDavid
A really great story - well paced, good characters and even taught me something about baseball! What's not to like?
Any story revolving around baseball is okay in my book. And the sex... I agree that often the climax is an anticlimax. The journey from point A (she's cute, too bad there's no way anything could ever happen) to point B (hasn't happened yet, but it's just a matter of time now) is what does it for me. Nicely done.
But it's really just an Erotic Couplings story with potential to be a love story Romance.