All Comments on 'Amazin''

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great story - looking forward to seeing how it progresses.....

A really great story - well paced, good characters and even taught me something about baseball! What's not to like?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Homer

Very good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Great story!

bradw316bradw316about 10 years ago
Not bad

Though being a Mets fan aside I like this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice...

Any story revolving around baseball is okay in my book. And the sex... I agree that often the climax is an anticlimax. The journey from point A (she's cute, too bad there's no way anything could ever happen) to point B (hasn't happened yet, but it's just a matter of time now) is what does it for me. Nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I loved the short story 5 stars

But it's really just an Erotic Couplings story with potential to be a love story Romance.

Bebop3Bebop3over 3 years ago

Excellent story. Thank you from a life-long Mets fan.

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