by D_Lynn
Again.....very realistic on all levels. Pacing is excellent. That nasty inner voice most of us have whispering and slicing away at us.... . I especially like that he readily states he is not all knowing and infallible. You are starting to heat it up, so I am not worried about the story being 'hot enough.' The journey they are on is plenty stimulating by itself. It is so nice to have another positive story in this genre. Thank you.
Am loving the humanity and reality even if am indulging in a little bit of fantasy...
Am looking forward to the next chapter;-)
It feels so real, so right. It feels that I am reading about actual people, not the cartoon characters which populate so much of BDSM writings.
Dakota more I read of your Stories.
The more I like to buy stroke to them.
Steve
Such well described feeling emotions and the sex well yeah it was ok, LOL!