All Comments on 'Amazing Hawaii Master Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Please finish the story....

This story has been AMAZING. I love how real life it is with no crazy impossible tasks.

Please, if you read this, finish the story, I've been left hanging by this 'ending'.

Many thanks in advance, :)

MPsslavetommyMPsslavetommyover 11 years ago
Don't stop here, please

I read "Can He Take It?" shortly after it was published and really loved it. Very stroke-worthy to this submissive male. This story has the same potential. She is a wonderful Dominatrix. Please don't let it end here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Please continue..

Please continue this story, this is such a fantastic and believable setup and I really want to see where this goes.

MasterMickaMasterMickaalmost 4 years ago

Une histoire bien écrite et très sexy! Une suite?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well... It's been over 11 years so I guess we aren't going to get any more! Maybe that's just as well. I can't say I find Jenn's style of domination all that appealing. I think maybe he should have chosen Megan. 3 stars.

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I don't look at the comments on my stories very often after they have been published for a while. Most of my stories are about role play, I love the power dynamic. I write about both female and male dominant, though I find I write most about female dom/male sub. Take Care.

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