All Comments on 'Amber and Blanca'

You're a good descriptive writer with nice pacing. Keep up the good work.

One quibble - Amber was tied up in a supine (face up) position; prone is face down.

I saw that this is your first submission, I wanted to thank you and encourage you to continue. You do a great job of stimulating all of the senses, and you are the perfect degree of edgy. :)

I can't wait until the next chapter

I would of loved to see the night that this story was inspired by!