All Comments on 'Amber & I Ch. 01'

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Anonymousover 17 years ago

Great Job...

Wonderful story that happens to have a great erotic component. Hope you keep at it.

Best,

George

Anonymousover 4 years ago

Erotic...

Other than my grammar obsessed self wanting so badly to suggest you change the title to Amber and Me, I loved this story. ;-) It is well written and very sexy. I look forward to reading the remaining chapters.

BradentonLarry over 4 years agoAuthor

Damn! You're right!

All this time, and it has been a long time, and I completely failed to see that point! Now I wish I could change it to "Amber & Me"! Argh!

tkh3nkey2110 almost 3 years ago

The height of erotica. Just great!

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