All Comments on 'Amber in Oz Ch. 01'

Liking it so far, made a mature English guy quite hard! Looking forward to more. Thankyou

I enjoyed reading that.

When does the next one come out? :)

I have completed Part 2 but unfortunately can't get it past the moderators. I'm not entirely sure what's wrong with it but I'm working on editing it. I first tried to upload it a few months ago and haven't had the time since. Should be up in the near future though!

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

Would anyone do me a massive favour and proof-read Part 2 as the mods just won't let it through and I'm not sure what to change! Please help! Thanks, Eskiimo

wheres part 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i need it somee1 tell me the site its on

With 'friends' like that, who needs enemies?

<3

You could have carried this story a bit further. It ended way too soon. What they did to her was fucked up. That was a betrayal of trust.