All Comments on 'Amber on Display'

You shift back and forth between past and present perfect and perfect. Pick one.

Anonymous......you are absolutely correct. I realized it as I was writing the story, but didn't know how to fix switching between present and past tenses. It seems easy enough to fix, but it is obviously something I need to work on. Thanks for the observation, and I promise to keep working on becoming a better writer.

Best of your stories, another chapter of this one!!!!

Enjoyed the story, please write more. Thanks for your writing.