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Click hereAmber smiled down at Lacey. Lacey stood up in front of Amber, leaned forward, and kissed Amber passionately. When they broke the kiss, Amber said, "You know you deserved that."
Lacey smiled down at her and said, "Maybe, but you are just lucky that I love being with you." As the two girls grinned at each other, Lacey turned to their husbands and said, "Excuse us, but Amber and I need to go to the restroom so she can clean up the mess she made."
As Paul and Ken watched the two women walk away, they both knew the night was still young. They packed up their stuff and waiting for Amber and Lacey to return so they could go to Ken and Lacey's house to continue this very erotic night.
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TopOfAmberalmost 10 years agoAuthorAnonymous......you are absolutely correct. I realized it as I was writing the story, but didn't know how to fix switching between present and past tenses. It seems easy enough to fix, but it is obviously something I need to work on. Thanks for the observation, and I promise to keep working on becoming a better writer.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoYou shift back and forth between past and present perfect and perfect. Pick one.
