All Comments on 'Amber's Mother'

great story

Wonderful story, wonderfully written! It just moves along at a great pace.

So fucking hot, creamed twice, before I just got tgotally blissed out with my fuck buddy

I've never had that feeling like I did when I read the story... I felt like I was Ryan - and that I was drunk and enjoying that.

I enjoyed your story. Well written.

Well written and looking forward to reading further chapters.

I like the domme mother....

I expected she would facesit him and he eat her creampie.

I really don't understand the people who say that this story is well written. Maybe they are as inarticulate as you.

You move the story from past tense to present tense then revert back while throwing back in present tense.

Basically you can't write.

If only you could have written the story all in past tense it may have been a good story.

Please try in future.