All Comments on 'Amber's Real Job'

Excellent writing! A good patient build-up. But what you've written so far guarantees some really hot stuff when the action hots up. More please.

19 year old working in an American bar? This does not have the phrases for a British, Australian or other foriegn work.

You did an excellent job of painting a picture of a perfect "10". I would have liked to see something that indicated she had the beginnings of a mild infatuation for her dad. Looking forward to seeing the direction you take. Good job though

I liked this story to like all others posted u .

.. as good as the rest, but I enjoy the daughters POV most. Can supplement the other side on my own XD