by BecauseYoureFilthy
Great story but Amber took off her thong twice in this story
Thanks for the feedback. My dislike of proofreading shows through I guess. There'll be more coming, and hopefully with less continuity errors this time.
Excellent story, nice basis for a continuing theme and a descent into complete submission.
...was taken off twice. Good story but watch out for those errors.
Looking forward to reading another chapter in this possible series. Great start, in spite of the error.