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FantazmasterFantazmasterover 17 years ago
A Great Piece Of Work

lonny37 has done an excellent of job of describing the possible hazards of taking an online relationship to real life here.Noteworthy, is the fact that she little option but to

cooperate with the demands of these three older gentlemen,as she had forgotten to let anyone know where she was or even provided for a safe call of any sort.

The demands of these three gentlemen are very well described in the course of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
A real fantasy

Although I would prefer it to be a role-play and not a frightening experience, this is my fantasy too. You did a wonderful job of portraying this scenario. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

well written but a bit dull to be honest!! keep writing thugh ! :)

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I have a number of stories in me, some are true, some are just fantasies. A lot of them have to do with meeting a strange man far from here in a strange motel and letting him do whatever he pleases to me.