All Comments on 'Ambushed'

Hot. You have to continue the story. Looking for the next 4 days. There can be a ot of exploring & maybe they can seduce Beth into the fun.

Wow! What an erotic piece of work you have composed. I do hope there's more... if not a continuation of this story, then whole new stories. Let there be lot's of stories from you as you seem to have the right formula.

Ok you have teased us enought.. MORE, MORE, MORE Please!!!!!!

Wow what an image that has conjured up! an amazing story !!! thank you

It was nothing special.. Just a typical lesbian story..

Fazza91.. in a previous life you must have been a female 'cause you capture the essence of feminity so well, well done - old man. lol.

Fantastic, so descriptic but to ease my longings there should be at least another chapter or two.

Denise Chu. Hong Kong.

I had no idea what or where Hamilton Island was, so out came the old atlas and now I know more about Australia. Sun, sand, sex and perhaps a shrimp on the barbie, sounds good to me and with those sheila's as well I'm on the next flight, though you could save me the moola and give us another chapter or two ???

but can I ask-urge you to post more chapters to this story ? I, like many other readers, would like to know the outcum and the interaction of their love making, don't leave the ending so much up in the air. Thanks, though for what you have done with this story, it's a pleasure to read. Ingar.

to end most of your submissions with the finale left to your readers imagination; believe me, it's fairly frustrating to not be able to relish reading a conclusion to their adventure.