by BlueMoonWriter
but could have much more in detail. This could be a very nice story. However, if you do start a series, please had more detail. I would have given this a "5", but gave it a "4" instead due to being too short.
The intensity between the two women would be a good start as well as why and how she was captured.
Also who is Ameera? Why does she have such authority? Why did she make love to Sara? What is to become of the two women? Etc.
Please keep this story going..they need to meet again and have a detailed lovemaking session...lol
A lovely read. It would be possible to continue with the story there are a number of threads you could follow.
I feel that if you put your mind to it you could develop a part 2. In which Ameera is driven to go to her Sarah. Now you take it from there. Looking forward to what you come up with.
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