All Comments on 'Ameera'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Nice

it is very good to have you back....

please continue making stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Very nice....

but could have much more in detail. This could be a very nice story. However, if you do start a series, please had more detail. I would have given this a "5", but gave it a "4" instead due to being too short.

The intensity between the two women would be a good start as well as why and how she was captured.

Also who is Ameera? Why does she have such authority? Why did she make love to Sara? What is to become of the two women? Etc.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
beautifully sensual

loved it

ReallyIwouldReallyIwouldover 14 years ago
loved it

Please keep this story going..they need to meet again and have a detailed lovemaking session...lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
I Liked It

A lovely read. It would be possible to continue with the story there are a number of threads you could follow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

OH MY GOD CONTINUE AND MORE DETAILS! IM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Rethink

I feel that if you put your mind to it you could develop a part 2. In which Ameera is driven to go to her Sarah. Now you take it from there. Looking forward to what you come up with.

5🌟's

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