by donalde
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" Good I am expecting them to do as much however I am sure that they will at least keep one of the cell phones and will check phone messages if they won't answer them if for no other reason than Catherine is due very soon. I will contact them soon and let them know that we are still supporting them," Charles said.
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Desperately needs punctuation.
What a story....please give us the next chapters, I know there must be more than one!!! Whatever, just hurry.....5 stars
YOU HAVE WEAVED A HELL OF A STORY. I FEEL LIKE I'M WATCHING A SUSPENSE MOVIE INSTEAD OF READING IT. YOU'RE AWESOME IS ALL I'VE GOT TO SAY. I CAN BARELY WAIT FOR THE NEXT INSTALLMENT.
You, sir, are a master story teller. Keep weaving this fantastic adventure. I will definitely keep reading.
I wasn't expecting Tony was the one who did it! Don!!!! You did it again!! Can't wait for the.next update!
I love that we are seeing Andrew's abilities getting stronger bit by bit makes me wonder what other talents he has yet to discover. I can't wait to find out!