by fazza91
Talk about BORRRRRRRRRRRRRR-ing!
Stick to soap operas and leave erotica to those with the talent to write ANYTHING INTERESTING!
it would be nice to have a continuation of this story. I have enjoyed your other tales that have been published here and I would like to encourage you to write more..again and again.
I just loved this story, the plot and the characters kept my interest right through the entire tale. You appear to be a very talented author and a joy to read, as you have the ability to depict your characters clearly and in a very plausable loving manner with out having to use 'potty mouth' language. Look forward to perhaps reading another episode of this story. I live in hope.