All Comments on 'America 2028'

by freak4candy

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
HitchhikerHitchhikerover 14 years ago
Is it a vison or is it reality?

Maybe not the best place to post this story, but this is a vision that many people have had for more years than you can imagine, (John Lennon was one of them).

The human race is almost like it's own entity. The question 'will we ever learn?' is a hopeful one and also impossible one.

The answer is most probalby NO.

Not until the planet decides it's had enough and wipes out the life we know, and starts again after all there is another 5billion years to get it right.

We'll take this story to be the teezer for a great novel to published in the future. Are the events the furture or now?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
You meant "discreet," not "discrete."

Learn the difference between "discrete" and "discreet." This is a common indicator of poor education.

Soylent Green is people!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I see...

...the start of it all in your sub-standard vocabulary.

Civilisation (as a construct) demands a certain level of intelligence from those who consider themselves capable of artistic endeavour, particularly in the field of literature.

You fail.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous