All Comments on 'American Hustle: Swing It'

Sorry about the formatting, I meant to have the first-person segments in italics to differentiate them from the third-person stuff, but it didn't work out apparently. Still, I think it's easy enough to tell what's monologue and what's action.

Very nice and detailef

Really good. Detailed and yet, full of sexiness!

You really captured the voice of each character in the monologue. Bravo! I agree that this needs a sequel. Please consider writing one. In the meantime, I'll be reading your other stories.