All Comments on 'American Idol'

Best part about your story is that it's realistic, it reflects my need to be with a man the first time who enjoys the sex, the passion and the kissing which turned me on. I can envision just being sucked or sucking with out kissing, it makes the act passionate. Cudos

NiCe story. I'd love to see where this story goes. I want them to be lovers. Please write some more.

I do not care if your english or writting is not correct I am not going to grade you like a teacher. What I would like is to have that kind of meeting with a man, its been so long since I have had the pleasure of a man get off in my mouth, I also like it in my cute little butt. Hope you post more later on.

You had some good material to work with, but you showed your inexperience as a writer on this one.