All Comments on 'American Slut Warrior'

While unrealistic, and not very believable, it was a fun little ride. I enjoyed reading this more than I thought I would. Very creative and just enough of a tease as well. 5 Stars in my book.

I do enjoy a story where you belittle a cheater.

For his personality and actions.

Not for the size of his cock!

Or the wideness of her pussy.

That's below the belt and only makes

the victim unlikable.

So 4 stars for a story, that easily

could have made a 5.

Thanks writer!

Complete twaddle and a really fun read. Vastly enjoyed it, thanks for that Canuk.

Those prizes add up to $46k not $36k

First you say naughty nurse outfit, then naughty maid. Did five different people really proofread this? They didn't do a very good job.

here's1st.offhere's - - didn't read i'll read when i'm able read not happening

sometime soon ......................... NOW THAT's BEEN SAID : the title this story ........

i've think you watch ` American Ninja Warrior ` likeway2damnmuch ............

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

Aside from the nurse/maid outfit error, this was a tasty little romp. I'd like to see some more outlandish sex stories like this. Maybe a sitcom with an incestuous family thaf always get caught having sex in public?

Where so I sign up for the next contest? I would win easily. Good story with a few errors, Always great stories from him!

Thanks for the entertainment.

I needed that today. Being in the hospital with heart

Issues, last week & not doing much this week,...again

Thanks for a fun story.

As for you complainers, that little stuff doesn't take

away from the story & truth is... no one cares if it's a

"Naughty nurse" or "naughty school girl" or "naughty girl".

Still, thanks.

Bob

That was fun !!!

Well done. 5 stars

This was a fun, sexy story. Thanks for the smiles.

LOL you didn't lie when you said this one was out there, hahaha... Great Story though..

I loved it! The obstacles might have been a bit weird, but it was all hot nevertheless. I found the bukkake part the hottest of them all. The presence of such a large audience make it so much more arousing for me, since I love the theme of exhibitionism. And last but not least - stockings. Without them the story would not have been as sexy. Thanks for a fantastic read!

I loved the whole competitive theme of the story. I am a fan of American Ninja Warrior and also a big fan of sex so it was very interesting.

This is by far my favorite author.... would love to meet and visit with you in person. You are amazing!

Take exception to your Point 2 in which you state, "Please note that some of my stories can be a bit extreme or out there... and of all my stories, this one may be one of the most fanciful and least believable... but it was very fun to write. I hope you enjoy this over-the-top story as I mangle the concept of American Ninja Warrior."

This "tale" was one of the most humorous pieces have read and the bantering was excellent. It was like being in the audience of the event. If it was "fun" for you to write it was even more "fun" to read. Have never seen the TV show you mention and maybe that would make a difference for me.

You NEVER have to apologize to readers. If your story is one page or 8 pages (pun intended) read everyone. Your on-going multi-chapter stories are a bit frustrating not because of poor writing but because have no patients and don't like waiting for the next installment. YOU are one of the rarest of authors at Literotica. Your "wordsmithing" skill and tale-telling ability is such that all that is needed for me is to see you are the author and click on immediately.

Thanks for sharing your talent to bring so many of us hours and hours of entertaining reading on such a wide range of subjects since April of 2010. A BIG PLUS are those with accompanying illustrations!

What is REALLY special is this old man comes from the era where seamed nylons, garter belts and high high heals were the pinnacle of feminine charm and sensuality.

May your Muse be with you.

Same idea and the same bad jokes and puns that are in all your stories. One trick pony rides again.

If you don't like my stories fine..

But this story is nothing like the wrestling story.

That is ridiculous.

She is one of the best writers on here. If you don't like her storys and think she is a "one trick pony" dont read it or waste her time commenting with nonconstructive criticism.

Enjoyed the story, and the take off on TV show, was out there but fun.

Silkstockinglover comes up with some of the nastiest, most imaginative sex scenes on this site. 5*

Yes it was out there but a fun read...I enjoyed it and keep it up!!!

Truly ROFLOL.

Great story. Far out as Jasmine says but, awesomely hot and loads of fun.

You did tell us right off the bat that it was going to be a silly story. And it sure was. But it was a GREAT story. You're one of my favorite authors on this site. Thank you!

Silkstockinglover,

You continue to be one of my TOP authors on Literotica! Although I didn't find anything in this story arousing, I found EVERYTHING about it entertaining.

I will continue to seek out your stories for the orgasmic relief I've cum to expect from you but will also look for the OCCASIONAL flight of fancy and laughter that this one provided.

Keep up the great work!!

X-Man

Well it is not hard to see that you are such a top writer, love readding your work.

Keep up this truely great work.

One of the things I love about you as a writer is how you can tell so many different kinds of stories.

It would be nice to see the ex's reaction at the end of the story. Oh well..fun read anyway.

Like you say, totally unbelievable but a great read. Apart from the error of nurse/maid it was extremely well written and loved reading it. Deserved the 5 stars I have given it.

Very entertaining and well written. I would offer one helpful bit of criticism though. Early on in the story, your character reveals that she's Canadian moments before gauging the temperature in Fahrenheit. We in Canada (as well as those in every country save the US and Zimbabwe) use use the Celsius scale for temperature. In the case of Canada, it's been a while since the conversion, meaning that anybody from the last few generations would not have learned Fahrenheit in school and except for in the case of oven temperatures would not be likely to be familiar with the scale, and would, in most cases, not be able to make a quick estimation of temperature in Fahrenheit. It's a small detail, sure, but small details can make a big difference as they serve to further immerse oneself in a character.c

Oh my. You're such a good writer no doubt. If it means anything to you, I hardly read any other writers story here except of course when you're yet to release a new story. This story beat my expectations

Yes there has to be more for this series. Like the ultimate American slut warrior where she retires with a shit load of money and a golden dildo for the undefeated champion. And don't forget about her wife Bambi. xoxo

Over the top, but fantastic. I only wish Matt had given you a good assfucking while he was at it. Maybe for the next chapter?

... it was over the top!! Delicious and delightful and outrageous ~ well done! Thank you ;)

Thanks for this very funny, entertaining and arousing story!

I really enjoyed that you gave a reason for your heroine to participate and raise to the challenge of each obstacle. Background stories for the protagonists make for so much more compelling stories!

I will also say that I enjoyed that your own fetishes didn‘t stand too much in the way of this story. You have a tendency to sneak stockings, submission and lez/gay into all of your stories and - while it is often very well written - it becomes somewhat predictable over time. Here, most of it was present but didn‘t take as much center stage, which was a positive surprise for me.

Truly enjoyed some of the obstacles by the way. These game contestant stories often too quickly escalate to all-out gangbang sex, whereas the built-up is what makes it interesting.

Hilarious, over the top and amazing!

Well done. Wonderful story. The tags are a bit wrong, though. Exhibition, not voyeur. Wouldn't classify that as an orgy, either. nd I wouldn't have chosen to put it in the Group Sex category. Exhibition, probably. Other than that, very enjoyable

Very sexy story, very different from all the rest of yours, enjoyed it immensely, as I do most of your stories.

Silky, loved this story you are most def a damn great writer.all your works are awesome. Thanks again. Love ya lots

Hot! Fun. Very entertaining. Thank you.

Just loved it, such a great story ,very sexy

G only that could be on cable

Lots of variety in this story and sex too from our foul mouth heroine. I thought the story was very familiar but there was no comment from me. Another like it? You have a great imagination.

amazing story, why did u skip so much time tho

What fun!

LET MY MAN USE HIS MICROPHONE

This needs to be pitched to HBO 😂

That was SO much fun to read!!!! You are so very talented. I just love all your stories!!!!

Absolutely hilarious and sexy-great writing SSL. U r incredible with great imagination.

Fuking outrageous, SSL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!