by alan556
I thought this was one of the best stories I've read in a long time. In a curious way, it wasn't - to me at least - erotic. It was a beautifully crafted, possibly factual?, account of real, caring, undemanding friendship. And for that reason, if no other, it deserves high praise. Because it is a story about true love.
I have to mirror another reader's comment and say this is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. Build up was great. Thanks!!
Got wet just reading it without any other action. Super read and a well put together story.
The story was great: it was believable, in plot, emotional content and sexual descriptions, and it just made me want to be there with the other characters, which is what erotic stories should aim to do. More, please.
Someone said it in an earlier comment: " In a curious way, it wasn't - to me at least - erotic". Nailed it - it's not often a piece of fiction actually makes me jealous, but how could you possibly not be of something that open & loving, the sex was almost just an afterthought. Brought back wistful and somewhat bitter-sweet memories of near misses, too. Bravo.
I have no idea why this story has no reviews!! I felt that this story has great characters,charismatics , and it's a great read that would or should turn almost anyone on!! What a fantasy turn on for friends to be able to be that close.
very likable characters-very relaxed tho hot fun wet finish!; nicely paced, superbly edited...
and also loved that both of them were natural-not a fan of shaved/smooth
5 and fave story and now author, after this and Flat-Chested Jill-looking forward to next H-rated story, where he first sees pictures of his wife nude...
tho you don't list any would like to see which authors/stories you enjoy...pretty sure I'd like the stories you like too
This was CLEARLY written by a dude, and it shows in the writing and especially the dialogue. The girls talk in weak, silly trite cliches, the way that guys THINK girls talk in their imaginations. I mean, it was a cute story, but it was so hard to get emotionally invested when I know for a fact that none of us actually talk like that. Maybe get a female editor next time to be a dialogue consultant? Just a suggestion,
I agree with @BluePixieGirl. Who thinks it's normal for your friend's boyfriend to hug you from the back, nibble your ear and grope your butt in the morning?