All Comments on 'Amorous Manipulations'

Your story is hot, but I was irritated by constant changes of tense. For example:

"In the bedroom, Caitlin moves the towel slowly across her body before balling up one edge and bringing it between her legs. She continuously stroked her cunt gently against the rippled cloth, sucking in a deep breath as she felt that familiar spike of pleasure in her clit, her vaginal walls convulsing as a flood of juices erupted from between her pussy lips."

The tense changed from present to past in two consecutive sentences.

Yeah, it's a nerdy thing to complain about, but...

Chris R from Richmond, VA enjoyed your story, also.

Great story ut made me really horny