All Comments on 'AMOST - Kacy & Molly'

I love it.

No problem with the actual writing, but ...

Your chapter names have become somewhat hit-or-miss, so the Literotica software isn't combining these as chapters that are part of the same story: e.g., AMOST vs. 'A Man of Singular Talent", and leaving 'Ch. #' or 'Chapter #' off the names of some chapters.

Also, I believe you mentioned in an earlier posting that the reading order might not be the posting date order. If that's so, what is it?

BTW, please keep writing.

Thank you both for your comments.

The stories can be read in any order. There is no plot or character development between stories.

MePe

Loved the twist in the end. Just one criticism: at times it was confusing who was the older and who the younger. I'd add a couple more "the older sister's mouth" or "the younger sister's ass" hints.

Also: you don't tag your stories as Mind Control, any reason for that?

Doorknob: Thank you for the comment, glad you liked it.

Yes, the "younger/older" clarifications would have been a good idea, I'll remember it for the next time if there is one.

I don't tag my stories as Mind Control because the story tagging how-to guide states:

"What Not to put as Story Tags:

- Your author name.

- The story's title.

- The category in which the story is posted."

( https://www.literotica.com/s/story-tags )

Since I categorize the story as Mind Control I do not add it to the tags.

MePe