All Comments on 'Ampersands & Pheromones'

Can't say that I didn't like it. I finished reading all the Hitchhiker's Guide books the other day, and can't help but notice some similarities in writing style. You get any influence from them?

can't believe you never told me about your stories before

got trolls, i see

in any case, i enjoyed this -

excellent employment of dry humour, and the sex scenes were highly erotic

one thing i might suggest is perhaps a little more character development, though certainly i understand that this is not always possible, or even necessary, in short stories. this, however, seems to have great potential for further development, and it would be a shame, i think, if you did not look into that.

in general, very well written, most pleasurable to read, so good on you.

LMAO... while sipping white wine whike Auckland is being battered by acyclone...

I'm still shaking my head! What an imagination - and to put it all together into a transit-romp... that takes talent!

The only real fault I found with the story line is the references to 'inches' - You Americans are really out of touch with the rest of Solarian 3's measurements of distance :-)