by ClaimedByLexi
I thought the plot was pretty good, but the tension between the characters could've had some development. It would have done wonders for the sex. Don't get me wrong, I liked it, but it could have been a little better(: Keep writing! <3 Lillian, KR.
I enjoyed reading this story, it is very good. I wish that you would continue with it as well as write other stories like it.