All Comments on 'Amy Ch. 02'

Do not make us wait so long for the next chapter. Make it longer. At least 2 pages would be nice.

looking to reading more, very hot.

where's chapter 2, containing all the details of the night before? Chapter 1 leaves off with Amy laying nude on the bed waiting for Layla to make her move. Chapter 2 starts the morning after? I think someone got too excited writing the first part of chapter 1 and forgot to finish writing it before starting chapter 2....

As long as horny I don't normally complain but "my slutty wife having dinner with my wife brother and his wife" where's mother? Try to be accurate

OK, this one was too far out there for me. You lost me 3/4 of the way through.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

The gay sex and adding the interracial kink was too far you started out with it being incest and turned it away from incest without any warning and adding the extra kinks killed it there was no details it started after they had sex not saying how it happened or anything you have a lot to learn before you are even a decent writer and story teller if you had any idea of what you were doing you would have known to add details at least details about what they did in the sex and you would have left it strictly incest you wouldn't have added the other kinks people want to read incest when there on this category they don't wanna read about gay sex or the hint of it they don't wanna read about interracial sex or the hint of it you adding 2 of literoticas least read categories to literoticas most read category just doesn't work and especially when it wasn't even any incest involved but you had it posted as such then you add a 3rd least read category in voyeur was all way too far you went from 0-100 in seconds and you just can't do that and have a good story it doesn't work