All Comments on 'Amy's Birthday Present'

Lame...I'm a virgin and your my daddy..that was all the struggle there was...then the anal and two black guys? Come on

Could have used a proof reader but over all not bad. It got my panties wet. And to the previous commenter...It was a DREAM. Anything can happen in a dream anyway you want it.

Contrary to the writer's username, you can tell this is written by a guy. And that guy cannot write.

Dream or no dream, that would never happen. Ugg. Hated it.

You lost me after the first para, what a load of crap

kind of cliche. I've used it, but more the "was it all a dream" variation, so it didn't stop me from giving it a "5".

To redeem the story, I'd ask that Amy walk in on Daddy in the shower.