All Comments on 'Amy's First Time'

... that the hymen is located at the entrance of the vagina. This didn't happen:

"I had worked my cock half way into her virgin pussy when she cried out, "it hurts, it hurts!" I asked her if I should stop. "No," she said. "Give me a minute. I want to do this." I held still, caressed her pretty face and waited for the pain to subside. "Okay," she told me. "Keep going." I carefully pressed on, sliding in another inch. Amy took in a sharp breath through clenched teeth. "Oooh".

I pressed forward again, overcoming the last of her hymen's resistance until I was completely inside her."

The author supplied more than adequate detail about the foreplay which led up to Amy's defloration; he might have spared us the repetition of the meme that has become standard in internet soft porn.

The use of the meme, without reason, cost this story a couple of stars from me. I do want to compliment the author on beginning In medias res; he showed more interest in story telling as a craft than do most people who post here.