All Comments on 'Amy's Magic Touch'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
great story, but the latin...

I enjoyed the story, and I like that you tried to write some Latin for the incantation, but next time try to make sure you get your cases right...you're using nominative way too much when you really want accusative, or ablative...a small criticism, but the sentence is pretty jarring if you have knowledge of how Latin is supposed to work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
um

next put buffy in the story

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