All Comments on 'Amy's New Apartment Pt. 01'

I see this is your first posting here and its a good one. I love the way you let the story unfold and your characters are developed well. I look forward to more and I hope you don't tease us by making us wait too long. Top marks for this one.

Now that did get the attention of MJ junior.

Nice erotic writing.

A very erotic piece of writing, was a joy to read.

I hope that you continue to progress this story further, as it has a lot of arousing promise!

You have made your grand entrance to Lit in a big way, have 5 stars to encourage you back

Well written. Can't wait for Ch. 2. Well done!