All Comments on 'Amy's Nude Day Fun'

This has the potential of being a fun, sexy, over-the-top fantasy, but in its present form it is marred by some confusing elements. For one, the element of blackmail introduces an unnecessarily dark note. If the purpose is to make the submissive couple's motivation more believable, it doesn't succeed. How can fear of exposure be their motivation if they are willing to perform naked sexual acts in public? Also adding to the confusion, the character "Jess" inexplicably becomes "Jill" in the latter part of the story.

This story is really creative an unique. I'm looking forward to your next story.