All Comments on 'Amy's Relief'

I gave it a 3 because it started out good, but I really lost interest half way through. You definately need to go deeper. Great stories have more than just hot sex.

You started out fine, but seemed to rush a little after the oral sex. don't let your own arousal get ahead of you. If you need to stop and come back later, do it.

I gave you a 5 because I saw a great effort there, and I'm sure everyone else did too.Just slowdown and take it easy. It'll all come in time!

I gave you a 5 because I saw a great effort there, and I'm sure everyone else did too.Just slowdown and take it easy. It'll all come in time!

Good in parts. The description of the sex is very effective but there is really no plot or character development. Slow down a bit and build up the context and plot line. Make a few perhaps minor observations to develop the characters. The faults are obvious but it is also clear that you can write so keep at it.

Short and hot.