All Comments on 'Amy's Smile Ch. 06'

This is writing at it's best! The only thing I hate is waiting for the next chapter!

JUST KEEP GETTING BETTER AND BETTER NO MATTER HOW MUCH TIMES I READ IT!

This is such a sweet, romantic, sexy story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

It's better the second time! What isn't?

5/5

mind blowing and humorous

i like the SECOND VOICE of Charlie

i wish i had one

-- jokerjck

I like the story, other than the fact Charlie won't say how he feels. Seems kind of ridiculous.

I REALLY like this story, it's just so humorous and at the same time very sweet ^^.

Not to mention I am absolutely LOVING the repeated use of the "prince" metaphore. That had me in throes for quite a while. I think I freaked out my family >.> .

Overall this is a great story and I am enjoying myself immensly reading this. Great job.

Any author who decides to write about someone taking a woman's virginity should at least research what he's writing about. You can't put the head of your dick, your finger, nor your tongue into a woman's vagina without going through the hymen or past where it used to be if she tore it some other way. It's not buried up inside the vagina somewhere, it's at the ENTRANCE to the vagina! If it's still intact, it's just below the bulge where the urethra opening is located. It's actually considered to be an external part of the female genitalia. Check it on the net. There is plenty of information there.

i can usually get over the inaccuracies surrounding the hymen tissue but in thus scenario I could not. The hymen is generally present in prepubescent girls. If you ever had anything in your vagina a tampon or whatever it's gone. Also most females lose it way before sex because it degenerates completely usually by the time she begins menstration. The book is not wrong.

He thinks to FU**EN MUCH.