All Comments on 'Amy's Spring Break Ch. 01'

by IckyVicky

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Anonymousalmost 8 years ago

Bit by a dog and no trip to the ER. Please!

mouth4u almost 8 years ago

Very good and very strange

Hi, Thanks for the work you did to write this story. I really enjoyed reading it. Your character was so nice and sweet, just like a regular college girl, but with a great sense of adventure. I was not expecting the story to go in the direction it went, but you did such good job of setting up the character that when it took off sideways it seemed natural, like one of Franz Kafka's stories. Please keep writing, and please stay a little twisted...Thanks, John