by Z_H_Locke
Amy and Quinne shall return - stay tuned for a new story soon!
At first I felt strongly that this should be in the BDSM or Non Consent category but though not quite my cup of tea, I kept reading. It was certainly arousing! I was wet & horny. I enjoyed the flow & pace of your narrative & the writing was simple & descriptive, conveying intense feelings & desires. You brought each of the charactsrs to life for me as the story went on. I felt like I knew these two women, & as I thought more about the story realized how much I liked them. So, for me, you made the characters real.
When I finished reading I was disappointed there wasn't more. And then when I began to think about rating this I was stumped. 5 stars? 4 stars? Boy, what a quandry.
So I decided to wrte you first, hoping that it'd help me decide.
I like this story & hope you continue it. Good work.
:-)
I liked most of it except for Quinne forcing Amy to accept her sitting on her face. Not a fan at all of people being forced to pleasure others.