All Comments on 'Amy's Wedding'

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RetMarutRetMarutover 16 years ago
Jump the Broom

While reading this I kept recalling Nick Lowe's "I Knew the Bride When She Used to Rock 'n' Roll." This is a fantasy I haven't had in decades -- plowing the bride of an unworthy groom. The sex was good, but the story wasn't venal enough.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
How to be a "friend" 101

The only asshole in this story was the bartender. He was supposedly the friend of the bride and groom, but that didn't stop him from taking advantage of the bride while he got the groom drunk. What a friend... maybe it is just me, but to enjoy a story I have to like at least one of the characters and in this story there was no one to like - just an asshole...and a bride who we have no idea why she's getting married since her groom seems to be worthless in bed and she can't even manage to stay faithful even one night.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great

Good story line... I'd do her too... And to the other readers with the negative comments -- THIS IS FICTION !!! GET OVER IT !!! There's a bunch of crap that gets posted here... but this is a decent story... Thanks for sharing !

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great story - keep 'em cuming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Really Soar - You know Lika - Da Plain Da Plain

Aside from the plausibility and negative aspects of fucking a friend at her wedding, the soaring got to me along with a few other wrong word spelled rite situations.<P>

Nuff Sad er said

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
THIS IS WHAT DNA TESTING IS GOOD FOR

TO FIND OUT IF YOUR CHILDREN ARE REALLY YOUR CHILDREN!

HamsterHamsterover 13 years ago

Use the damn spell checker next time! Great story, but the spelling was very distracting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Thank you for this story!

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