All Comments on 'An Accidental Pickup'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Nicely done, believable characters

and just enough sex. Nicely captured the way it was back then, when nice girls didn't shave, didn't give BJs and we didn't worry about STDs.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Good But

Iliked the story but do you know you used the word 'voluptuous' 16 times.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Nice sentimental story ...

... I can remember those days of yore in college. "Nice" girls did give blow jobs back then, but only until we let the guy between our legs. And certainly guys very rarely went down on us, at least after we let them go all the way with us. Well written - love to read some more stories in this genre.

gogreengogreenover 12 years ago
i liked the story. 5 stars.

well written and well done.

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