by cornerboi
Too bad there's not a negative 100 stars! That still would'nt be enough! And there is no way this is even close to incest. It's about a gay teenager getting a spanking for being STUPID!
Stupidest thing here. Don't waste your time with this one.
lol best READ ever. carry on writer, give us more of your lovely writing please, please carry on using grrrreat english and... ohhhhh i'll stop and just say please shoooooot meee aaaaaarrgghh this was the worst sory ever
Pretty good story but madam is not needed. Mother's are fully capable of training and disciplining grown sons. Too many ignore son's behavior thinking it is just a phase. When it continues into adulthood action must be taken . Keep writing you have a lot to offer.
I don't know what is wrong with some of these people and I hope you don't take their comments personally either.
I'm liking it enough to ask for part 2 please!
I couldn't even finish reading this. It may be incest, but it has a freaky edge that I don't like at all. That guy has issues.
Spend some time trying to learn the basics of sentence structure for the English language. Apparently English is not your mother tongue which made your story difficult to follow.
I love the strict, severe disciplinary mother and the very real punishment She and Madam impose...nicely written and well played. Thank you!
What prevents him from beating his wife and mother with the utensils until they never raise their hands against another individual again?