All Comments on 'An Adventure in the Woods'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Wild!

Adelaide Nurse, you write some of the wildest stories I've ever read. Keep up the sexy work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
another little idea

mmmmmm this is pet cindee. i am a male slave who wrote to you earlier. in reading this story, i thought of a fantasy of mine from a long time ago. i was taken about 5 meters from home and stripped. my hands were tied behind my back and i was told to find my way back home. again, your stories are the best

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
wrong category is deceptive

These are very intense, but predominately S&M not exhibitionism. Mary's acts are very cruel, but if both enjoy it, it's fine.

The few spelling problems aren't too bad, but still distracting.

Thanks for explaining the Brit/Aussie terms.

LazerGuidedLazerGuidedover 16 years ago
Great Story

Mary,here's a suggestion for a little humiliation and exhibitionism. Dress her in a sheer blouse with no bra. Maybe better would be a white t shirt. Something to make her look slutty. If it's hot, a little water on the shirt to make it look like she's been sweating, and to make the shirt more transparent. Have her go into a store to buy some drinks but without money. She has to barter to get to walk out with the drinks. Maybe just a look at her naked breasts, maybe it'll take a feel of them or her pussy. You can set the limit where ever you want but I would think giving the store clerk a hand job wouldn't be out of the question. What do you think?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nice story on total dominance

I found it fascinating. I would on occasion avoid the S&M aspects, using bondage only as her torture. Also, gag her but do not blindfold her. I was thinking something like a green on a golf course late at night or very early morning while still dark and coming back just as the sun is rising. Karate belts make for splendid binds.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Excellent!

Great story!! I can understand the "rapist" part. The "master" in such a scenario MUST be abel to protect against such a thing. And be able to fulflill that roll as appropriate.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Adventure!

I loved this story and only wish that I could be so lucky as to have an owner who would take me on an adventure in the woods ! Thank you so much for writing it !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
an idea

pierce her clit next time she is naughty and give her ivory soap enemas

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

You should have a pierced pussy and the nipples and clit should be chained together

Rest everything was good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Add magic wand belt and vibe

There us belt that made to hold wand against clit. Adding that to what did would have been perfect. Pussy vibe. Anal.vibe Maybe niipple vibe and clit vibe all together damn makes me wish I was a girl thinking about it

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