All Comments on 'An Afghan Bride Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
I know this is Literotica

But the sex scene seems forced to me. I don't think you have to always have an explicit sex scene in a chapter to make a story sexy. Just my thoughts, otherwise its a great beginning. I look forward to part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

nice twist!

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