All Comments on 'An Afternoon Alone'

Your writing is more than decent and it being in the WoW universe makes it 3x as good for me. So what I am saying is keep on writing, I know a writer needs support and here it is.

So he's got a 3mm diameter cock? That's pretty bizarre, isn't it? I mean, to penetrate the cervix without it being manually dilated with specialty equipment 3mm is about the biggest his cock could be.

Why in the world would someone either a) write erotica about someone with a smaller cock than any human in history or b) not understand the basics of the mechanics of sex and female sexual organs?

Hint: the cervix doesn't get penetrated. And writing such nonsense ruins an otherwise decent story. It's like writing that someone's testicles are on the end of their cock instead of at the base. It's factually and grossly incorrect.