All Comments on 'An Afternoon at the Cinema'

I liked this, well done!

Well written, especially the way you found your way to the cinema, instead of a direct "straight in" approach. Nicely developed story.

not likely to happen maybe in the dark of the cinema.but the toilets?tooo much

excellent build up, good characterization, enjoyable read...

very very good

I really enjoyed this story - great characterisation, original story and ending and hot scene in the toilet. I loved the humour within too. Well done!

The desire mounting in her is so well portrayed and the urgent need to share her's with the stranger's desire emerges deliciously. Hotly erotic

You've captured perfectly the hesitant thrill of entering a darkened theater to view pornography -- a complex blend of lust, shame, and curiousity. And the real sex depicted as a fantasy on the screen begins to shade into a fantasy of real sex with others in the theater. I'm delighted to find a woman who shares the thrill.

I really liked it, but was wishing you had taken him back to the hotel to finish off what you started in the comfort of the room.

Wonderfully erotic.

There is a mix of porn and eroticism in Lit. I much prefer stories of the erotic sort, and to call this erotic is to carry on an exercise in understatement. You write very well, as I've commented in your poetry section. And I would like to thank you: You have given me back the desire to explore this section of Lit - my original reason for coming here...

Wonderful story...

Loved your story, such a familiar recurring fantasy of mine. My first story on here was about anonymous sex at a cinema. Well done.

Tis no wonder why so many people love you! Hot, beautiful, sexy and a wonderful talent to write also... Hope you write more of the ex/voy style. Thanks for you work. :)

A class act BabyBlue, a lovely, well written and erotic tale.