All Comments on 'An Afternoon with Heather'

Please see why I loved this story on the New Story Reviews in the Author's Hangout of Lit Forums

Dammmmm that was one hot story. I would dearly love to have a Daddy like that. Keep up the hot work.

Surprise, surprise ! There are authors here that can write ! Very well written, very hot; an excellent story that got to the point.

I loved the images here. Yes, I am normally a poet but had to do a quick switch when reading this one ~ Loved the lay out and flow. Very hot and sooo very naughty ~!!

More Please~

not my usual choice of story but I thought I would check it out because I like your poetry. Well written and enjoyable, would love to see a chapter 2 :)

cheers, Marie

left me wanting more...

Oh my! Is it hot in here? A beautiful tale that I will remember for a very long time. Thank you!

I think I've had this fantasy before... a lot. nice work.

Very nice, Sir! Nothing like a good spanking from a naughty "daddy!"

I am so turned on right now. :) Loved it!

This naughty girl is so wet right now from reading this story!

this story really got me hot and bothered! I have this fantasy of my best friends dad in a similar situation and you describe it so well!!! luci xxx

well done

thank you