All Comments on 'An Agreement'

the story was great, write more to it.

The only problem is that the story ended too soon.

This is probably one of the best stories I've read here. Really, all of your stories are currently at the top of my list. PLEASE write a sequel to at least this one. It was awesome...

You are a top erotic author, well done.

Yet another great story from one of the person I considered a master now in writing these stories. Amazing, simply amazing. Great emotions and the blending of the lust and love is perfect. Continue writing!

shitty story you really expect us to believe that he lives with two bitchs and doesn't have a lock on his door and that he would acctually have sex with them after they have caused him so much pain and embaressment get real it would never happen he would ignore and avoid them at all costs try to atleast make it sound believable

This is one of the best stories that I have here read sounds realistic

Great story.

I liked the story but it jus ended with out a conclusion. Did they go afta rena? What happened?

I gave it a hundred for style, but thought it needed a sequel to tie up the loose ends.

my pussy is really wet now i can feel it

Amazing, I hope to see a continuance! :)

what, no ch 2??? sooooo disappointing!! more like this please,,and soon!!

XD no matter how much you want more this author will keep you wanting more and won't make a second part. he/she has great talent but always leaving you wanting more from the story but i still give him/her a 5 out of 5

CONTINUE

I liked that you chose situations to match the emotional transitions that needed to take place to be interesting.

Please sir, can I have some more?

this story was way to unrealistic never happen in any stretch of anyones imagination. i wish writers here would stop haveing their freinds give rave reviews on subpar stories. this site needs more HONEST reviews so the wannabe writers will either improve or go away.

You need to get a life!.

You must not have any brothers or sisters. this can and does happen more than anyone knows.

Is this all you have to do is read the stories here and try and put everyone Down?.

Many young fellas along with their young sibling fillies--brother and sister siblings--for the most part nearly all, have played "I'll show you mine if you show me yours"! I did it with my two years younger sister for quite a number of years!

This guy of course is like many males, they're not satisfied with what they have--his one year older sister--he has to get everyone else, even his oldest sister, involved.

In the real world it doesn't work like that. But, in the real world the brother and sister arent doing it to please a bunch of perverts reading their exploits either!

Very sweet story and very "older sister, younger brother" behaviour. Very arousing too. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

the type of teasing you write about fosters HATE not love. no way in a million years would he want anything to do with either of the bitches EVER.

Yes, your story is very arousing and would like to see you continue please. You have the beginning of telling how they get Rena to agree and expand / share their mutual sexual fun discreetly. I will look forward to reading more, thank you !

would love to see if Marin and her brother get Rena to join them and if they have sex again

Sis and bro masterbating together.

Your story f you and your sis masterbating together was good, but when you and your sister decided to do it, you should have gave much more details then what you did. To bad you didn't go down on her and lick and suck her virgin "pussy."

tell us the rest of the story ?

This story is far from done. Please add more chapters & finish the story!

The story felt a bit rushed and the climax wasn't satisfying (pun intended). All of the concepts, events and characters seemed to work; but there wasn't enough glue (character interaction) to hold them together well.

Are you just short on time due to circumstances in your personal life? Ive now read 3 or 4 of your ideas; even the multi-page story had so much meat left untouched, though your basic premises have been some of the best Ive encountered in terms of situation, character, and plot dynamics. It makes me want to expand some of your work that has obviously been here awhile. although it would be preferable, so much better, and not to mention devoid of unpermissioned plagiarism, if you got the itch to put some more into the ideas you already laid out at literotica. BEST WISHES M8

I would agree with prior comments concerning expanding the plot but the memories you provided were awesome. Thank you

Great story! I hope you write the next chapter and get the three of them together!

Pleas DO NOT STOP.

Can’t wait for the next chapter

This story badly needs a few more chapters.

Having said that I have awarded it a four since it's so unfinished. I do hope you get back to it and finish what you started here.

I wonder how many. Siblings start out this.

Mutual masturbation first then more.

Both experiments then excitement

Really enjoyed this story and feel it deserves at least one more episode.

Nice....but I concur with others that it needs expanding.

I think this story is poorly written from a plot morallity stand point. Throughout the text we were repeatedly shown how the sisters repeatedly teased the brother about catching him masturbating. We were repeatedly shown that he grew to resent it. Yet it's completely flipped on it's head the second one of them lets slip that they do it because it's a turn on. I find it plot breaking that the main character doesn't express his resentment. I find it plot breaking that no mention of this resentment is written about after this moment. I also find it plot breaking that the sister doesn't stand up for her sister when the main character calls her a slut. Having sex, even having a lot of sex, does not make someone a slut. I find the use of this word as an insult in this text rather than as dirty talk to be a huge turn off. This is compounded upon when, after somehow convincing one sister to have sex with him, after they both mutually agreed not to, which is also rather plot breaking. The main character goes on to want to have sex with the other sister that he just finished insulting only hours earlier. All of these things combine to ruin the story for me entirely.

I can’t believe it just stopped!

It was on a 5 star track when is just ended mid-story.

Bill S.

Way too far fetched and rushed. The plot should at least be somewhat plausible.

There should really be a part 2!

Starts out very interesting, but too short. Please write more.

I really enjoyed it, what little bit of it that there was...

It was very rushed as if you were writing for the 750 word contest or something. 🤔

Then there's the ending that leaves open the possibility that he's going to be fucking both sisters. But we'll never get to read about it because you didn't put any more effort into writing about it. That's truly sad. 😥

Half of a story deserves only half marks, but we're not given the option of voting a half of a star. So I guess that I'll round up from 2.5 to 3.

Good premise.

Sex is too rushed. Too abbreviated. Over much too soon.

Needed much more teasing. Dialog about how good the masturbating felt during it. Questions about whether it would feel better faster? Slower? Harder? Softer? With lubrication?

Can I try?

Three stars.

Steamy hot