All Comments on 'An Amazing Discovery Ch. 16'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
from day one i read your stories and like them

don't rush this story and fuck it up.keep writing and let us as readers enjoy the story.great writing and good common sense to the plot.move stacy and her sister to the town, where he and his sister staying.sell the penhouse.let mom joint the harem and live happy ever after.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Please keep it going

as this is one of the really good stories on this site.My only concern is for Dave,if he is fucking Clare,Stacy,Jane and(presumably) waiting for Lisa to hit 18,and then she can join in then he will not enough energy to run a garage,in fact he will be lucky if he doesn't finish in a wheelchair.All I can say to him is LUCKY BASTARD!Keep it going please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
LIKE A SOAP

This series is like a soap or B movie,its good but lacks real erotic fire

DirtyDirtyBoyDirtyDirtyBoyover 16 years ago
HOT DAMN!!!

Damn good series, the finally will be awesome, i just no it, but don't make it cum too soon. Tell me lisa's birthday is just around the corner!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
great

cant wait for the next chapter nd hope the series will continue.

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